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I'm sick as a dog X_X But I went to school this morning anyway in order not to lose points for attendance. I finished a whole kleenex box I got from my car in two hours of Text & Composition in English class but I also wrote something! We had to choose one of the given thesis statements and to write an introduction paragraph with the selected thesis statement being the last sentence of it. Here's what I wrote...
"Don't we get shocked eveytime we listen to our parents' stories about school? They had no freedom and no option or opportunity to make a decision. The teacher had all the power. He could even beat them up. Now, things are different . There are no longer students called 'teacher's pet' because, especially in private institutions, teachers have become 'pets'. No discipline is left and the students get dimmer and dimmer each passing day. Take my high school. I can suggest several improvements needed at this corrupt cradle of education."
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